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Post by Christopher Silva on Mon Aug 11, 2008 3:22 am

I lost you my son
on that day
to dark things so unfair

No worries son, papa comes
he is on the way

The blue steel's caress is sweet
Never as sweet as you
Together we'll stand and seek revenge for the innocent and few

Christopher Silva
Christopher Silva

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Post by Greystar on Wed Aug 13, 2008 9:58 am

It makes you think. Like the beginning of the third stanza, "The blue steel's caress is sweet"
Good job!

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